Alone

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by redyelruc, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    To wank alone is normal.
    To speak alone, not quite.
    To smoke alone's a pleasure,
    But to drink alone is shite.

    It's a little rhyme I wrote a while back. Discuss...

    *edit: Before this gets moved, I want to discuss the content not the literary value of this rhyme. Hence, RT rather than Writer's Forum. Thanks.*
     
  2. Penny

    Penny Supermoderaginaire

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    I completely agree..
     
  3. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I'll be drinking alone tonight. I'm bored. I've got no money. And there is half a bottle of rum on my desk eyeballing me. Shite.
     
  4. praxiskepsis

    praxiskepsis ha!

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    I would get rid of "normal."

    It is neither poetic nor actual.

    Not to be to critical...lol.
     
  5. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    But wanking is considered 'normal'.
     
  6. praxiskepsis

    praxiskepsis ha!

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    Yeah, but you need something poetic...I don't know. I'll come up with something.

    The word normal is just too cerebral. Let's thing of something lyrical...
     
  7. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    OK, anyway I've got heaps of poems in another thread if you're interested. They're a little more developed than this ditty.

    http://www.hipforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=259364&page=1
     
  8. PlacidPete

    PlacidPete Member

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    haha dude thats gold
    nice
     
  9. Jimmy P

    Jimmy P bastion of awesomeness

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    I don't mind drinking alone.
     
  10. MellowMike

    MellowMike Member

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    Nice rhyme! I'm guilty of all of the above[​IMG]
     
  11. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

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    i love how you spell shite...i'm going to start spelling it like you.... :)
     
  12. Unknown American

    Unknown American Rogue Capitalist

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    I like it. It is okay to be alone.

    There are far worse fates. At least you can be yourself.

    I am not a big drinker, but I understand what you said there.
     
  13. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    That's because I'm irish and sometimes to give shit some extra emphasis, we pronounce it shte, like night.
     
  14. Geonagual

    Geonagual Member

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    is that where you are from? Ireland?
     
  15. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    *nods* but I haven't lived there for 11 years. Gypsy blood, I guess.
     
  16. Geonagual

    Geonagual Member

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    Drinking alone is just going for a head change..so, it is not as bad as it may feel or appear.

    you can speak alone, but there are no ears to hear the words..so, they fall to the ground with no destination.
     
  17. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

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    :) i love the irish....
     
  18. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Yeah, I'd rather smoke alone, but lack of opportunity and financial constraints has led me to drink. I find it boring drinking alone though, which is why I rarely do it. One of the best things about drinking is bouncing conversations off of others whereas if I'm stoned, I can easily find opposing opinione within.
     
  19. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    One of my favourite words that very few people other than Irish people use is gobshite. It's somebady who talks a load of crap, or an idiot.

    gob = mouth

    My uncle jack used to frequently be heard shouting, 'Shut your gob!'
     
  20. Geonagual

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    whats up with the other teachers there...are they cool?
     
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