Alias Religion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Aug 1, 2005.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Burning echos into memories of dark nights,
    silent flights of the soul seeking solitude,
    sharp spirals so devined of travesty.
    My savior of implications I can no longer imply
    on the life whose limits let the limitless die,
    the resistance of concrete evidence
    will be believed to have existed without of the soul.
    What about the confession of those holy in
    word and vow, enlightenment a satirical attain--
    mention the tide that will bare me and bear me away.
    This is no glory or harvest, a skeleton gesticulating
    praise in the days of the repentant sinners and
    eager disclaimers trying to sell your soul so
    you save a buck. The rates are discount and
    even those too poor to see can forgo a meal to
    heal with that lost tempo, lingering sway a hypnotic lingo
    equipped with no sense of time, and I rhyme poetry silently
    scribbling on walls in black ink
    and because it will not fade they paint over it erasing
    my message and obliterating my voice.
    I am a true prophet of a prophecy devining all of the
    irrational complications of life's softly sifted realms.
    We can all blend our voices into one song
    and this harmony will outlast the broken ceremony
    of wine and blood (those willing to feast on their
    friend) and foe the stoic poll bearers of
    historical mediocrity in this complex perplexion will anyone be
    allowed to remain free except in hesitancy to
    speak bolder and cry harder than the wind can rustle
    the old and haggard leaves from the trees?
    My ideas are cramped like my style and my
    smile is too bright but will it ever be so obvious
    that I am in need of some light in a dark tunnel day dream of sighs?
    I am art so raise your voice and howl at me
    There is no need to scowl
    for there is no organized pattern of revolution
    continual evolution of circle and sage
    inevitable in the arms of the raging deluge,
    have you forgotten to flood me the
    dreamer of dreams undreampt before?
    Do you pray for the the broken tatters of an emblem?
    I am a devil forgiven, an angel condemed,
    and a servant of the last religion man
    will turn to in the end--a relief to those
    who fear order. Let chaos sweep it's great
    wing over my bones and the echos of mortality
    ring in jealous arcs over the hills and over the stones.
    There is an eclipse of flow: uninterrupted inhibition,
    and a startling lack of contrition in these eyes.
    It doesn't matter what I put down in these lines
    because the edges are still broken,
    lives taken and words misspoken,
    smiles upside down in hearts that beat
    the frown of spiritual monotony and
    idolatry to false gods and similar puns.
    Mortal or immortal wingless sea?
    But I don't think they understand this query
    and I am alone in this quest for some
    uncertain sacred divinity.
     
  2. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    you do have talent, this read well, got the impresion you reached once or twice for huh, ommieness (sorry that may have been a bad choice of word) but i realy liked it
     
  3. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    Congratulations for your persistance. Thanks for the comment.
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    uncertain is a sacred divinity, incarnate in the flesh, immortally dying.
     
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