addiction

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 2extreme, Nov 17, 2006.

  1. 2extreme

    2extreme Member

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    when I met you
    things were so happy,
    we were perfect,
    but now I'm wrecked

    together we would smile
    outstretched smiles
    of intoxication;
    like every day was a celebration,
    like living was truly worthwhile

    and we would travel
    to such a different land
    just you and me, just like we planned,
    dancing in the sea, hand-in-hand



    but now,
    lately,
    without you
    I haven't been feeling myself,
    I've been feeling so blue,
    like you left me standing in the rain
    and you never came back to me
    ever again
     
  2. ommanipadmehum

    ommanipadmehum Member

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    hey there!


    i do know the feeling.know the feeling of being alone and abandoned.all i can say -things'll change...i know it's not that simple at first,but everything changes and so will that feeling of loneliness...

    take care,
    -marina
     
  3. Like_Unto_Insects

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    :nopity:



    *giggy* just kidding! .. I'm not exactly good relationship type person, but I definitely empathize with the feeling of abandonment ... It hurts to be left behind by someone who's supposed to care about you.. hmm perhaps you need to be tickled!! :D
     

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