Achievements

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pagansrule!, Jul 15, 2006.

  1. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Man



    bellows greatness,



    his words melt into space.





    Man



    builds monuments,



    the earth seems to shrug.





    Man



    spills blood,



    the world continues to spin.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    wow dude, just wow. it's so simple and brief, but nothing else need be said. So small and brief, we are. Perfect.
     
  3. FreeBird1969

    FreeBird1969 Fleas on their paws.

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    That's good. :eek: Profound.
     
  4. Biida

    Biida Member

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    Insight alight and
    Mysterious,
    So simple I
    LOVE IT!

    Thank you :)
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Nice, reminds me of the 'Emerald Forest' where one of the
    shamans were talking about the clearers, on the edge of the
    rainforest, and the city dwellers as the termite people.
     
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