Absent open eyes In a far away place Traveling different miles Through sunken minds This is a short poem i wrote during a lecture in college, its about how me and my friend were there physically but actually daydreaming through the whole lecture. I dont like posting my poems cos i think they're crap but i wanna see what you think about this one.
i like it, but i also feel like stuff could be added to it but sometimes simplicity is best, and who am i? if it remotely conveys what you are trying to get across then i say it is good as it is.
