I don't know if it'll make sense to anyone, its alot of metaphors. Tell me what you get from it, I'm am amateur poet. Listen to me closely and you'll lose yourself In a filing cabinet you'll find our names filed close Dark seeds grown in the same garden spawn the same colored leaves Our surface, so alike, so clean, covers separate minds taught by different kin Dark secrets sewn in ourselves are so intricate that the best weaver couldn't come near to fabricating it In a filing cabinet they may find our names filed close I keep myself hidden in a book You keep yourself hidden in a cage I fear you'll break out one day Screaming out my pages Listening to you made me lose my separate identity
its really good...from the looks of this ur a natural...u asked to say wat i got from it. well i interpreted it as two people so alike but yet so different...they have different minds and different habits that all came from the same issue the same pain and their appearances reflect the pain they've felt in their lifetimes so they appear to be so similar to everyone but only their hearts can tell the true difference between them and the way they process the extreme pain and life that has been given to them.
that was beautiful...it seems to be about love from my point of view...but anyway if thats amateur work youre going to be brilliant when youre no longer an amateur.
