A Little Girl Once Said

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EuphoricMelodies, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. EuphoricMelodies

    EuphoricMelodies Member

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    Just something I wrote a little earlier this evening. Critics welcome :) .

    Walking through this town
    Seeing all the familiar faces
    Their graces, and friendly places
    A pretty little girl came and said to me
    "Anything can be anything if only you believe it."
    Isn't that freedom?
    Isn't that free will?
    Isn't that the american dream?
    Squandered by promises
    Of fast living, and quick riches
    Material means of salvation
    Deception in a smile

    A single, crystalline teardrop
    Fell across the little girls face
    And this time she said
    "A life is nothing without love"
    One night stands and the stench of infidelity
    Shouldn't love be true?
    A falsetto of tear choked voices and hung up phones
    It cuts straight to the bone
    Spread love
    Spread peace
    All we are is what we become
    Love will always conquer all

    A melancholic day, drenched to the core
    The little girl came up to me once more
    She said, "everything is beautiful in the rain
    For in the rain, there is no pain
    And everything looks a little more sane"
    Isn't that life?
    Isn't that real?
    The world seemingly so surreal
    Rain streaked windows give a view to few
    But for those that look
    A picturesque view of eternity
    That's all it really took
     
  2. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    It would make a good song.
     
  3. Salem Blair

    Salem Blair Member

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    Its very nice
     

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