A happy poem I was forced to write

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *electrica*, Jun 16, 2005.

  1. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    Sick of reading all my sad stuff, my friend made me write all the things I don't hate about myself. In case you couldn't tell, I didn't try.
    (Oh, and I'm really not that vain about my appearance. I'm just a typical girl who hates her body and is forever dieting to look more like Gwyneth Paltrow. I was hoping if I wrote that I love it, it might come true.)


    I am me and I kick ass
    I am crazy and delusional
    I am mysterious and tragic
    I am incredibly fucked up
    But that makes me interesting

    I am a girl, a pretty girl
    I was blessed with crooked teeth
    Giant eyes, a cheerful smile
    Such mindless laughter
    And curves out the yin yang

    So I can get away with things
    I'm seen in public dishevelled
    Unwashed, half-dressed and crying
    I never make an effort
    I am more fearless than most

    I can paint and I can write
    I can sing a little, too
    I can do anything I want
    Or anything you want
    Except write this stupid poem
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i know it wasn't meant to make me laugh but the end line did! it's a good bit a of therapy to write positive stuff about yourself! good on ya for doing it *electrica*!
     
  3. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    Oh, no, it is supposed to make you laugh, and I'm glad it did.
     
  4. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    Such mindless laughter
    And curves out the yin yang

    love it =)
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I like the feeling... clear and flowing
     

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