A Different Style Of Writing For Me...

She Dreamt of Love & Nothing More

You can pull on my heart strings
& make it beat like your own |marionette|
I know you wish I was your little puppet

& you've *dreamt* of seeing me in
[Bathroom stalls & back seats]
You know I could be your .biodegradable. queen

& you think I *Crash Into You*
with the .strength. of an Overdose
& you just want to hold my tragedy close

All I do is [[Fall apart and start over again]]
I used to think they would--*but the drugs never worked*
& my .momentary crashing. lifestyle you'd love to befriend

Maybe you don't know (what you've been missing)
You've dreamt of the [poison.lips] to be kissing
You've felt .asylum.empty.

You know you love this padlock nightmare
& then you look into the mirror
And there's no guy that wants you here

You've dreamt him up in your own imperfections
You forgot to mention
No guy wants a tragedy's affection Ì?




I was bored...just wrote what I was thinking and added some symbols and stuff...


What do you think?? And be honest!! Don't worry about being harsh cause I can take it...if you like it I'll try and post more...

 

I tried to fix the font siz but it didn't work...sorry about the large font...

 

Well..
I'm not sure about all the symbols and stuff but I DO like the words. Especially asylum empty and padlock nightmare. Aren't you the girl that posted 'I Am' a couple of weeks back?

If so, I'd be really interested to see a lot more of your writing on here. Good job!

Peace,
Aidan

 

Really? Thanks! And yes I am the girl who posted that...

I'll try and post some more poems but without the big font and the symbols...

 

i like the words the symbols kinda confused me

 

'm not to sure about all the symbols and stuff either
but the words are awesome
the symbols would throw me off

 

thanks! i'll post more and without the symbols i promise! lol

 

I thought it was pretty cool

 

Good job.
It made me think about the troubled past, and trying to be clean in the future, of the "victem" of the poem.

 

thanks! I posted more so check 'em out!