A Comet's Tale

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lainey, Jun 7, 2006.

  1. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    If You were the sun
    And I were a comet
    When i get so close to you
    Past the orbit of Mars
    My outer ice would vaporize
    My trapt dust released

    I wrote this with that dream guy in mind.
    I commonly write about guys that i have loved or desired.
    This is my favorite.
  2. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    What's your favorite love poem? [that you wrote]
  3. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    i remember my first one. i wrote it in 6th grade. actualyl id ont remember it but eh some bits and pieces but my teacher stole it.. they always do. bastards.

    does anybody else have the problem of your english teacher somehow misplacing it or something and then uses it as an example for the next year.
    she could have x-roxd it.
    i just hate to looz things i write is all.
    It's so great looking back at it all
    but g2g peace
  4. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

    oh gosh i have so many love poems that i have written, ill dig one out soon and post it.

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