Discussion in 'The Whiners' started by Orsino2, Dec 28, 2004.

  1. Orsino2

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    The morning always brings another sun

    Forgiven are all the other ones

    Another lesson for another time

    Makes you feel like it's just a crime

    The evening always brings another moon

    Is setting, for she often she comes up as the spoon

    Above her, tangled are your every thought

    With meaning, for every fight we haven't fought

    You'll find yourself on a desolate path

    For everything is an illogical math

    Thanks is given, others bought

    With meaning, for every fight we haven't fought

    Forgetful, are our sullen dreams

    And confusion ties shut our unmended seams

    You tell yourself, there again

    Find yourself your only friend

    Tell me now, my sweet friend

    Of what really matters in the end

    Only time - time will tell

    You make it heaven, you make it hell

    All these metaphors, ups and downs

    You can smile or put on a frown

    Positivity, negativity

    Only you can wear your crown

    No title at all...
    ©2004 Boris Samagootceio
  2. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

  3. Orsino2

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    Well... I wrote it, but Boris is my pen-spirit (I refuse to call him just a name)... He was my first and only alter being within me. I discovered him when I was eight. In my mind, he's a very elderly author... maybe in his 60s. Sometimes he smokes a pipe. He's in florida right now... he looks like a mixture of Ernest Hemmingway and James Michener at the moment and appears to be an author. When I first met him, he was a Russian-Italian undercover MI6 agent appearing to be a truck driver with a pet chimpanzee... he was depressed over the cold war :(. Boris wrote some of my most influencial writing... I missed him... glad to have him back. :D
  4. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

    are you looking for a title...cause if you are, i would suggest something completly random like the Cream song "Badge" or "Tomorrow Never Knows" by the Beatles...i like it though...
  5. Orsino2

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    I do that all the time... I have songs and poems titled anything from "Dirt Roads" to "Asshats On Fire"... :p and the song Dirt Roads is an instrumental... :p
  6. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

    that "dirt roads" thing reminds me of the Guess Who instrumental called "969 [the oldest man]" about the oldest guy in the Bible cause Bachman was a morman...

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