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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by skyfire, Dec 10, 2004.

  1. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    Here Again

    Life
    keeps bringing me back to this place
    and I've thought this thought a thousand times
    (I always think of you)
    an eternal déjà vu
    it distresses me-
    this failure to keep peace with myself
    as my thoughts pass into oblivion,
    it makes me wonder-
    was the darkness really darkness?
    or was it just that I couldn’t see the light?...


    you bid on my soul
    and though I didn't think it was high enough,
    no one bid higher
    so I was sold


    and some people need a label
    for every way of living
    and for every way of being
    but I just let you be
    in hopes that you wouldn't give up on me...


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    Kiss Me Again


    Confused at your intentions
    I wouldn't let myself love you
    but your face was woven into my dreams
    until I could no longer remember
    if you were with me
    or if I was just dreaming
    but I woke up alone
    remembering the night I was with you
    and the things you said
    and your eyes reminded me
    of all the poetry I had ever known
    and when you kissed me
    I found a part of me I had lost
    and I didn't even know it was gone
    the feel of your lips
    and your fingers in my hair
    returned my soul
    repaired and polished
    and ready to love
    but I was only dreaming
    and I woke up alone
    remembering the night I was with you
    and wishing I could kiss you again...
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

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    i love the first one for the way
    you ask for acceptance..
    to be you just be yourself always.....

    for life beautiful words :)

    the second this is wonderful
    how long is the dream to last,
    how the longing in words show the times
    you have had...........

    love n peace from saff
     
  3. the marsh hare

    the marsh hare Member

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    i really like your writing style-beautiful poetry.
     
  4. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    thank you so much for your kind words...
     
  5. Icurus

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    I enjoyed both of these S.F.,
    It feels as I've felt many times, and
    we're written from the heart, a heart,
    your heart that may have been longing
    for the return of some one special to you,
    it was heart felt, this tells me you are no
    stranger to heart break,an for this I feel
    for you, but it was an experience you had to have,
    how else could your words have reflected this fact
    so well, very nice Skyfire......
    Devon Knight ~
     
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