I've known this girl for almost 2 years now , we were dating at first but i think we just started on the wrong foot and it ended pretty fast but i...
Yeah, I didn't pay much attention do the capitalization. And if you did sense the confusion, well thats what I was trying to deliver :) Thanks a...
nice little hate thread you got yourself here
its a web , you spin around me, when the heartache is almost gone. its a spell, you cast on me, when I think iam done. I look into your eyes, and...
fine by me
haha nice .
feeling alive isn't easy for everyone :)
thanks :) The way I see it is that everyone wants to become a god in his/her own way whether its for bad or good, for self interests or for the...
loved it! , i liked the last 4 lines the best. on a side not, you seem to be doing pretty well with the rhyming structure so far, but don't let it...
I voted 'Yes' , although I'm not entirely sure that there is an afterlife...either way no one will ever find out until they're dead :)
anyone else?
thanks :D , wasn't really sure about that one.
I really like it. simple, well laid out and gives a nice message. :)
I think you need to balance out how the sentences sound , you could do well with either a rhyme / rhyme , or rhyme/non-rhyme/rhyme structure .....
~~~One Thing That Matters~~~ It doesn't matter if you give or take we all seek one of two things in this world from the moment we are awake,...
Amazing!! Iam out of words really :D
thanks :)
So many years have slipped away since we last sailed, far away the sails are up and the wind is right, and diamonds are floating, at a mighty...
Its really good , just needs a few tweaks then its perfect. Loved the first part. :)
Thats awesome I will pm you my email , you can send it there or over msn. :)
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