reading this is bringing tears to my eyes, it's so good. "To my intelligent friend" was amazing, just to name one. Right now I can't offer...
I liked the first one the best, has great images and flow. Though, it sounds an awful lot like getting stoned, so be careful handing that in at...
I like its simplicity.
hey, that's really good, shining perfectly with the spirit of haiku
Thank you both. I am also pretty happy with this one, though I'm not entirely sure it says what I want it to, how I want it to. Oh well :)
thanks, guys. And vcr, and i'll definitely consider the changes you suggested, I like them.
I like it, and your explanation makes perfect sense. It sucks when such a call is met with rejection, so I'll just conclude for my own peace of...
My first ever untitled poem. It doesn't have to stay that way, but I can't think of anything good for it; maybe you can. :) Fire, water,...
wow, that's incredible.
A Tiny Space This flame burns the silence; the solitudes of the heart are fodder for the fire; we are a dance of silent light. But it's a tiny...
They aren't bad, man. I really liked Heaven's Raindrops and Eventually the Sun. I didn't read the whole page yet, though.
As some famous churchman said at some point, "there, but for the grace of God, goes I" as he saw a leper or some other miserable wretch walk past...
Wow man, I really dig it. Though the repetition at the end doesn't work for it, IMO. It's strong enough that it needs to be said only once.
it's like nonsense, because I can't figure it out, but it's all so beautiful. I don't know what it is about it but I really dig it. And it makes...
It felt like I was being led somewhere, but the sidewalk randomly ended. I like the peaceful sense of it, but was somehow hoping for more.
it might mean more to me if i knew what the Prairie Home Compainion was.
He watches, but does he participate? Good poem, though.
Thanks, forrest. VCR, i wasn't offended. I was just explaining myself.
Wolf Imagine how dedicated to life he must be, to live it that way. How absorbed in it, how at home in it would you have to be, how hungry for...
When has it ever proven itself to "evolve"? Look at history, man. I did, and that's why it scares me. Same violent streak, vastly more powerful...
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