[/size][/font] I liked that part because I can relate to it the most, nice nice thought in just 2 words "morally contagious", I wish I could...
I liked the descriptions, well played, I thought the beginning was a nice touch even though it is someone else's work but I'm glad u wrote the...
Nice Nice vocab, I'm glad I checked this piece out, I liked the repeat with a change in a few words for emphasis, nice detail capturing effect,...
I liked this poem I agree with SFB on the meaning, keep at it, I'd like to see longer ones from you. peace
Thanks for the feed Littleskinny, seriously, I'm glad u explained ur reasoning and we all have our own opinions in which I respect, check out my...
Love poems aren't my strong points in creativity that you normally see from me, check this and I'm dedicated my posting of this to Littleskinny....
You write poetry and post on here or what? nice ta have ya, I'm a newbie too, nice screen name by the way Serenity has never been so sleepy..hehe...
yeah yeah, Edge is here, I'm 16, male and from Minnesota, US of A, been writing poetry for a lil' over a year, no training, so itz pretty raw...
I love ur feeling in this poem, the way u write, expresses every interest provoked detail to yet more detail, example is: "this along the river...
I liked that, such a nice feeling, u have a great way with describing a scene and mood blended together to give this raw feeling to the reader,...
bravo, I really enjoyed this piece yet again, I like meanings of symbolism in this poem that love is not of material items (in this case a...
I liked that really deep, I'd like to see more from you, longer too, keep at it. peace
Thos were by far the deepest thoughts in this poem. You have depth in ur poems that most couldn't concentrate on, but I enjoy this piece...
I can see ur well liked here (for obvious reasons) I like ur style and expression in writing, I think most of it is only on the surface though, I...
nice ending especially, and I liked the relation of desire to a song/melody, keep it up, check out "Blind Blue Eyes" for my love story. peace
I liked that part the best, keep at it, short an' sweet, I think u had more to say though, nice imagery at the beginning too, check out "blind...
Thanks for da props, I noticed not many people give feed on here, most of'em just drop sh*t, nice ta get some feed. peace
I liked that, fairly descriptive, sorry for ur "loss", keep up the writing, I'm glad u have a release for pain. Try adding a ryhme scheme next...
How can one individual… Turn my world upside down… In less than a lifetime… For a lifetime… By three simple words… A glance that proves them…...
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