Thank you, veinglory. I agree that the thought description is at this point, a distraction. I am trying to work out parts of what "the story" is...
Hey, all - here it is, folks. The conclusion of Chapter One & start of chapter two. I am really hoping that I will hear from some of you who have...
I think I'm purposefully slowing my pace down....but, the first chapter is really meant as an introduction from out to in of Lorelei and her life....
Last year, I wrote a short story specifically to submit for publication in a feminist analogy of short stories and essay's. Titled "The Women's...
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. I am trying to convey that a child cannot even conceive of the evils they are subjected too....don't know if that...
Thank you. I think you're right....going through revision two I'll have to watch for ramblings. I have a style though of trying not to edit...
Excellent. Inspired. Vivid and structured. Not forced. You are one of those folks that makes it look easy. So, I have to ask - do YOU listen to...
Try to read your poem as someone who hasn't been in your head. The thoughts are sometimes choppy/disconnected...perhaps try rearranging them...
Wanted to share this here...get some thoughts. I wrote this for a beautiful en-year-old girl from my home town of Toronto. Her story, a year...
Here's a thought, Ass. Why not post some excerpts here? Ask for some input. "Everyone tells you you should be a writer". That's fine, but, you...
Yeah, I have that damn useless cd that I bought back in '96 for "gotta girl"...only to discover that I hated the rest of it. Not that it was what...
Hi, all. It's been suggested to me that placing this in the poetry forum was probably not the right choice, and that this belongs here. It's...
Okay. I think it's great that you have come and said something as bold as "I'm shit with Adjectives". That, my friend, means you have potential....
Very passionate. Dripping with sexual overtones. Sounds like you're out of breath!
Hi, Dark Rose. I like to see teenagers writing poetry. Yours is good! Some of your imagery is well-honed. Keep it up!
Hi, all. I'm new here. Just looking for a place to spout my work in progress, I guess. If you like it, I will post further chapters. It shall...
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