Needs some line breaks. Other than that, excellent!
That was very enjoyable!
Reply reminds me: "I hear babies crying, I watch them grow, they'll learn much more, than I'll never know, and I think to myself, what a wonderful...
Oh come now, you were inspired by PEOPLE LIKE YOU, they don't deserve hate.
You don't sound like a hippie at all. Not that there's anything wrong with that. You're talented, and I hope you love soon: that would be poetry!
Hmm... half of me likes it, but the other half is confused over your definition of "spitting".
Simply good. Poets give stalkers a good name!
I especially like how you wrapped it up (Sometimes I wonder how you do it); well done and keep writing!
Separate names with a comma.
