Aww, now I'm blushing...innocence is a tricky thing I think! I've never thought of innocence as being either a weakness or a strength, though...
I didn't mean to touch a nerve with the plageurize thing!
Ok, I found it. The Poem is called 'Valentine' and in the poem, the subject gives his/ her loved one an onion, rather than a traditional token...
No? You've never heard of Carol Ann Duffy? Lots of people thinks she's naff, but I like her. She's an English poet, really well-known here,...
Yes, I am indeed 21...and you really do say the sweetest things, I never did take your breath away! I was naive then and I'm naive now - some...
A lovely effort...brings out the hippy at the heart of us all :) I like to think that I am so many colours I can't even name them, or indeed,...
I like the last lines, about needing love more than you perhaps need an onion, but I feel the overall material was a little bit...plaguerised....
*GASP* Can this be my very same Bhaskar, the one I used to dreamily converse with all those whiles ago? It's Firebelle - if you are that same...
at last, something i can relate to! i love the bits about the lemonade skies, and the butterfly drunkenness...but my advice would be not to make...
Hello. Do you remember me? XxX
hello again
i will kill all of u before my time is up
ure all twats
That's ok. I was born in Hammersmith; lived in Fulham for a while, then moved to the outer suburb of Northolt (shithole). And guess what?!...
That's real effective use of layout: the way you spaced the words 'you lied' apart from the main stanza of the poem, and the full stop after just...
'Bridges waiting to cross The cool pouring of wet sunlight'...this, my friend, is Sheer Genius!
Loved this a lot...wouldn't criticize.
I have to admit, your inspiration for the poem is just that...inspirational! And my lack of knowledge and comprehension surrounding religion is,...
Hmmm...this was the first poem of yours that didn't enthrall me as such...I think you have written much better. Still, I can't talk...I have had...
I've always liked the way you write with structure; the antithesis to my own messy poetry :) It's nice to read you again X
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