arrested by a pretty lady i hide a leap in my hand i hide my hands behind my back now tell me left or right you make me tingle you make me...
^ I smell a vampire A quick thing about your poems (man it's late) -- I like it better when you don't write in rhymes. Those poems stood out for...
So I have this fetish of going through people's poems and deleting most of them in order to create a poem that has only the best (IMO) parts in...
Well I certainly applaud you for figuring out so many rhymes and making it all make sense.
OMG these poems are excellent! Loved both of them tremendously. Nice. The latter was hilarious and on point! The first one was very interesting...
I liked it and have this thought: I wish there was something in more detail, something smaller than big words, you know. Like when you say 'hair...
PLeb, you asked for it LOL. Here's how I would edit it. All I did was delete parts. It's all in your 'order'. LOVE INTEREST an angel, daisies in...
I'm intrigued by this poem but on a technical note would like to see the lines cut half if possible, so they're easier to read. The sentences are...
I like lyrics that are obscure and have some powerful imagery that lets you put your own meaning on them. As you have the lyrics now it's not...
Anything fairyish :)
Lately I've started to feel naked without any feathers in my hair.
Hmmm a good idea! I need the bra though but, yeahhh. I can see this happening soon. he hee
GamingGal, perhaps slow down a tiny bit and only make plans to enjoy each other's company that night that you will have to yourselves. There are...
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