This is the most beautiful poem, perfect. Thanks for sharing, lovely.
I was on Hip Forums years and years ago, lately I'm Twitter at Eve_Castle Join me there, if you would... but I will try to post here as well when...
I enjoyed reading this. Very original visuals... bony moths banging their heads... hands are udders of blood...
This is definitely a draft, not sure when I'll get around to messing around with it if ever. Here it is in any case: The Earth is Our Spouse...
thanks MaryG
I made a few notes in this one Keep writing! I enjoyed reading your stuff.
I also understand that haiku should have some kind of reference to a season... I believe that's right... I have read a couple that were quite...
Very original and thought provoking. Nice job.
Stained fingertips lightly lift lit cigarette to lips long quiet. The moon above, the only voice blown smoke, the only pattern. A tiny hand...
Very deep and thoughtful writing. The part below was the only part I stumbled on... something about "calls now" was not clear for me. I'm sure...
my favorite line is "sniffing wildness in the wind". very nice poem.
Overall this was a solid poem. I did wonder about the sequencing: you go from police lights, to bonfire, to racing through the city, to...
Hi Hawk, I read through all your posts. Your early stuff on here, like Forest Fire, had some awesome visuals weaved in. Your instincts seem to...
This is great. The only constructive feedback is for you to take a look at the word "Dissolve" and see if dissolving makes sense to you here. I...
this was an interesting poem. the rhyme was not overpowering, so I enjoyed that - many poems using a rhyme scheme can sound trite. I wonder if...
this was awesome feedback. as usual A. I'll rework. thanks!
I wasn't sure what this was about but I enjoyed it... she bled sik... pulled strands from the smog.... and that final stanza on beasts... splendid...
Very original thought and visuals. I especially like the Frida Kahlo one. Simple and the rhyme is not overpowering. Please keep posting. On...
A. Came looking for you. Hope you took care of the blister thing. Early on someone recommended keeping it clean and using something sterile......
Periodically, you come to the abyss, reach out, touch wet sable dripping darkness casting shadows you can’t confess, and you run. Sometimes, you...
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