This is a short story I've been tinkering with for a while, so I thought I might as well open it up for critique here on the Hip Forums. I'm sorry...
I would've replied in the thread Sticky'd at the top of the forum, but it was closed. Anyways, I disagree with this rule very strongly. I resent...
Pain seeps through the blackest cracks of every dusty street corner and broken road to Hell. The river flowing flowing flowing to nowhere...
Wow, thanks Ghost. Really glad you liked it!
Glad you enjoyed it Wolf!
Oh I think not only do they, but they have to in order to get published, especially in today's world. If you want to write professionally, I would...
Thanks Hayzle! Glad you liked it!
It was funny, but I would say it's much more on the side of prose than it is poetry. You made a clear point, which is nice. Good job Wolf! On a...
Cheers Love You left me last Saturday Left me in cigarette cloud Thick as the hole in me Left me in a heap of green misery And ashen tears that...
Hey y'all! This is the beginning to what I think will be a much longer piece, but I wanted to know what you guys thought. Anyways, there might be...
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This might be the best thing anyone's ever said about a piece of mine. Thanks a ton Searching Paws! Your feedback is appreciated as always.
This is a short story I wrote the other day. Hope you guys enjoy it! THERAPY It doesn’t matter how you...
I did not write this piece. The man who did is a wonderful musician who goes by the name of Pete Doherty. I heard it today and really loved it, so...
Glad I could help!
I can't, of course, speak for everyone, but I would assume the goal of any novelist is to eventually get published. The truth is, while there are...
I made some suggestions above, but I know I throw out half of the suggestions I receive from people, so do with them what you will. Overall, I...
Firstly, thank you RambleOn, for the great feedback! Very helpful. I don't feel comfortable writing in the 1st person as a woman. I've tried it...
Very strong, powerful ideas. The story has massive potential, but you have to clean it up, grammatically speaking, if you want to get it...
Glad you liked it Wisp! And no, I haven't written anything further on this yet. I've sent the piece out to a couple magazines. Right now I'm...
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