If you would read, and take in the content, that's my whole point... If all one is concerned with is puncuation and grammer...than go back to...
I'm 'black', I guess...and maybe Indian, seminal...but was raised around lilly whites...as such my early years were influenced by living in a...
A totally classic commercial for you guy... One that really captures the spirit of the 70's....in that area......
[IMG] Ye, like he said...what's wrong with you hippie chicks... There's even a nice view of Mt Rainere hoovering over the valley... You could...
Well kiddo...I'm older than you...and don't exactly fit your demographics... But that was once my territory, out that way... And I'm sorry no...
Ladys and gentleman... What's with the negitave energy carried by so many so called 'hippies' on here?? If you see someone is trying to do good,...
Ahh heck...and here I thought you would have something constructive to add or contribute... I can't help it if your blind... Nor am I concerned...
'Dirtydog', was my 'hook'...and kept me tied to the story... It worked...and as I read further I learned about 'God'... And the relationship the...
Get to the action first...then descriptions later... Example 1 Mark was a slightly over weight man in his mid 40's, still struggling with his...
[IMG] When you share a story on the net, think in terms of 'preview' or 'premiere' Like Movie or Broadway previews...they don't show the whole...
I don't know what the dreams means to you... But I do know the above sounds like an interesting opening scene in a movie... It kinda sets the...
I have a personal blog on another site... My blogs routinely get 100, 200, 300 times more hits or views, than other bloggers. These other...
If it were a story I was writing, then I'd maybe agree... But even then, I think each subsequent post clarifies the point of the original. And...
It's about coaching young writers to write in a way that grabs peoples attention and keeps it there... Writing in a way that's relavent to...
No thank you...your response was kind and gentle...considering all the stuff I wrote... I have much respect for your style of writing... My only...
Look guy, I'm not into this contridictory side track let's go after the poster type of stuff... Either you grasp my ideas, or you don't... Which...
Whatever they are, I don't really trust them...there's something eerie and unrealistic, to me, of everyone, no matter what type of life they...
My computer is operating slow on this site for some reason...so when I'd like to respond in 20 seconds or less...seems to take me 4-5 minutes...
Hi, glad you chimed in.. (by the way, anyone ever tell you you favor Stephen King?) I often compare what I'm trying to express in terms of music...
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