:D I'm a beginner, and this is my first poem. I usually don't write much, but thanks for all the advice and comments. I'll make sure and remember...
Thanks, Ojo! I'm glad you like it
As the sun and moon rise In psychadelic skies, I finish my dreaming, Opening my wide eyes. Shaking dreams from my flowing hair, I breathe the...
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