nicely done poem. very existential and raw..i love it
The Ambrosia has entered my veins, The celestial secret no longer remains. Chaos now rules my brain, allowing me to break through the chains. For...
ok so i havnt really done much research on this topic so i could be completely wrong, but as far as i know the concept is fueling your car with...
Thanks..that's a good idea. It was supposed to be we're
I love it
It needs work but this is what I have so far. Hopefullly it's not difficult to grasp the meaning Lying on a beach, Life is great, The sun warms...
Really cool..my favorite line is "Mary jane kicked me out of the box"
Yea I was thinking the same thing..that tends to happen with all my poems. The beginnings are usually just spontanious ideas that come into my...
lol I'm glad you guys like it
I feel the same man
Red eyes, orange flame, green jane; A rainbow for my brain. Pass the grass, to the left is what they teach you in class: Smoking etiquete 101,...
Amen
Thanks for the feedback man. I agree it needs tons of work..this was just a quick 2 minute Piece. Since I've posted the original it's been...
How would you live your life if you found out it was a game? Would you go back 3 spaces to help those in pain? Would you take out other players...
yes it is. i take it from your comment that you have read my others. i dont want to give the false impression that i am an extreme pessimist. i...
Close your eyes, let the wind carry you away, Fly across the the world, see a different today, Don't get caught up in different languages, just...
I was not intending to offend anyone in writing this, but it may be offensive, so if you are extremely patriotic, i recommend that you do not read...
It wudnt work cuz that'd mean u never existed, thus unable to kill someone
I hide my weed pipe grinder and lighter in my bathing suit pocket
All fears ultimately translate to fear of the unknown. Fear of the dark is because you don't know what's there. Fear of death is because you don't...
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