This is amusing. Quite simple banter, really. Let's keep it going!
I really really enjoy this poem:)
Thank you very much. I am so glad that my poem affects people like it affects me. That is every poet's dream. I appreciate your support very...
My parents are in the pre-divorce state and it is really hard on me. I wrote this reflection on the silent hatred in my house. The Stillness...
The Test of Time The endless race. The unbeatable clock. The pounding drum. The impending chopping block. You'll never win. What will happen is...
i really like this. the part about uncle sam reminded me of across the universe (sorry, im a beatles fanatic)! i love the last lines too. "mother...
thank you everyone for all your comments! they mean so much to me! i will try and read all of your poetry too!
thanks so much for all your feedback! i really appreciate all the positive opinions! so i wrote some new ones the other day when i couldnt...
My word One word I own, Is what I give, One chance to hold, One time to live. In the background, I always heard, The way that's gone, My life...
I think this is on it's way to being very good. Maybe work on the rhyme scheme a little bit but over all this sounds like it has a lot of potential:)
thank you very much. Your opinion means a lot to me:)
thank you so much! I'll try to shorten it and get to the point quicker. I think I'll take out the 2nd stanza, which I feel is the most cliché....
Please read and comment on my poems! I'm just beginning an I need some constructive criticism. Your poems are really confusing and yet at the...
I'm also just starting out. Would anyone mind taking a look and telling me what you think? I've only gotten friends and family opinions and i...
Please tell me what you think! My word One word I own, Is what I give, One chance to hold, One time to live. I never knew, That I discovered,...
Please tell me what you think! Across the Lake Have you heard the breeze in the clouds when everything is dark? Have you heard the way the ocean...
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