Loved it. That's all I have to say.
I think the second poem needs something added to it. What do you guys think?
Oh guys, I am so sorry. The second poem was intended to show my friend how ridiculous he was being in his fear of the elderly. It is his...
Keep being there for her. From what you said, I can see my past self so much in the bad relationships this girl puts herself in. Please show...
Oh my goodness, this one moved me. I loved the reference made to apathy in the second stanza. These are the kind of writings that have the...
I liked it because of the word flow. I do not think anything needs to be added. One of the few that I can honestly say I want to read over and...
I tried to be a vegetarian once and still don't eat much meat but I stopped because there were no places I could go eat with my friends that had...
Very powerful but I don't know what to say about the subject matter. I think many are wary of broaching a topic that makes so many uncomfortable....
I like this because it displays some of the ideal human characteristics but how can someone be "never mean" and "unmerciful" at the same time.
I love it when great lines pop into my head when I am performing random tasks. At first I started to write them down but sometimes I wasn't in a...
Hmmm... I don't really understand it. I like the way it wasn't overly wordy though. Keep up the good work
Is it supposed to be sad or funny? I could recognize to some that it would be sad, but it kinda made me chuckle. You made the old guy seem loveable
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New poem guys...what do you think
Yeah man... I feel you. The problem is, sometimes I feel like I am one of the ones with the factory line expressions. God, let a few years pass...
The tiny grains of sand in my hand. The harder I try to hold on to them, the more slip from between my fingers.
I like, I like..... I have no idea why but it makes me smile.... hmmm...
Ok I have now been confused by two forums in a row. Tonight is a random night. Good haiku though even though I don't write them.... They scare me
Yeah, I liked it too even though I can't exactly explain why. It's such an angry poem but I think the way she spelled things might have softened...
Well, even though some have freaked me out, I think it will be great. For every bad report there has been at least five for the good side....
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