Hey, it's been awhile... any of the old readers still around? I Met My Lover Smiling I met my lover smiling, when still I knew him not; a...
they keep getting better, snowflake's my fave worst high sum sum up the lies shakey yeah frozen medicine
yeah I would love to hear you say these do itt
could be a bit more messy
bitterness kills I'd like to hear you read it
nice little slice too neatly done for me... ehhh too much resolution but it was very neatly done and if you wanted neat you have it... sounds...
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The Written Word I'm not going to be baby words in a class the kryptonite of the delicate mind whitelivered youth pallored daylight...
this would be really great read out loud imo, ginsberg-style "it was probably more of the same" great yeah i like this a lot
i get a very sort of bukowski vibe, if at least just by style and appearance\ yeah he was really into that blue font
thanks, red. i was on a lyrics kick for awhile but now I'm trying to get back into writing poetry for its own sake. as my last submission will...
bomb diggety
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pretty avant-garde, breaking it up into separate posts. that alone gets it five points from me.
great
alone to the soup shop feeling good and imagining bringing another person with me for one day sunday soup guys wait for them beneath blue flags...
Chris's ideas about God aren't orthodox at all. They sound Protestant more than anything else. The alternative you present is much more...
this is cool but why are there so many line breaks?
hilarious. lots of energy in this. revision never hurts but it might be even better to plow ahead. keep writing, I'm looking forward to what you...
visceral, very cool. however, maybe consider adding a line break between "confidence" and "I" and then making the entire poem into one verse...
Separate names with a comma.