It is the proud who have met defeat It is they who must walk alone In remembrence of what was forgot Planters of the grass between broken stone...
empty bowls of dayless chowder static buzzing from a television broken and shattered hurricane winds softly blowing a dolls box and a child is...
Losing silver in sheets That I sit blankly on Contained on With you. Broken memories shadow over our loves light- a distraction from the look...
"Angel of death...save me from this place"... so bittersweet. Are you speaking of this angel throughout the entire poem? well, anyway, I love...
ahhh poetry... Thank you for sharing. Do you like to free style your rhymes??? Me too:)
I love that... thank you. :) It is every little thing- little ribbon...little dirt...little people..that don't notice-for the ground takes up much...
Hello again. Again and again.... Hello. Tell me a story, a feeling, a secret Anything..tell me everything! No WAIT- Save something. Something you...
Don't be fooled by me. Don't be fooled by the face I wear. For I wear a thousand masks, masks that I am afraid to take off and none of them are...
Why? Why do you stay? Are you comfy? Take off your shoes... Stay. Why? Why do you stay!? Are you scared? Hide under the covers, With me. Lies......
This is my opinion. Relating to the information you provided outside the dream: The people represent new experiences outside of your...
I am agnostic, so this poem was somewhat convincing to me. I loved it. Thank you.
If i were to say that sometimes things are misspelled, would it detract from the essence? It could, but not if your attempts were simply to...
I wait at the window, opening it a little more each day. I watch as everything comes to life, in a slow and ressurected way. Lightening and...
I just want to say that the snoschberries taste like snoschberries. ;) Your land is silly and sweet. I liked reading about it. Good poem, man....
hmmm. It could have been. Don't eat meat my friend.:) I enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing it.
Wow. I am flattered...that my poem filled your thoughts with these amazing descriptions, that took me further than the poem I wrote, itself. No,...
thank you both. I'm glad that my perspective could be appreciated. peace& <3
I was captivated by the whole poem. It was tempting and directive. "Know yourself, be love, and ripple." Put exactly into words. "and...
wow, I can really relate. You leave an impression. I am one of those who wander. How can you not? Sometimes I feel lost. But all I have to do is...
Energy I bop my head, move my shoulders, hips, and feet. I am smiling, moved by moving, to the lyrics I can relate, I am grooving to a beat....
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