I am the eye that reads your poem, the ear that hears your voice. The silence that greets your silence. Your words are drawing me closer to you,...
This is weird for me to say, but it's like entering a new world. When I'm in my London residence, almost every day I pass Marylebone railway...
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I like em. Do some more.
I hope Themnax sees this. He loves trains.
I'm with you on that, Gardener. Well said. It's the same parasites finding a new host, ethanol, to control our lives. This has to end before the...
It amazes, and perhaps it isn't their fault as opposed to a cultural phenomenon, that young parents of today use the fact that they have children,...
There is no criticism I can offer, but I would like to say this poem is superb.
I actually like this poem very much. It has a lot going for it, but the poet was totally wrong to disperse it like this over the page. All the...
What motivated you to write this, Ronnie?
LOL. Trekker's a nice dude, Ronnie. He's probably not used to your acidic wit. Yet. Can I ask what the good points of the poem were? (apart from...
I like the dark mood the poet created here, but I can see how the overall negative emotion might put a few people off. I would like to see the...
Strength.
For a first poem in this forum it isn't a bad effort. It shows that you've put thought into your work. That is the positive criticism. One...
[img]Fair enough, I get the message. I'll get back to work. In the meantime, here's a nice little "Matrix" compilation to whet your appetite of...
[img]Well, well, another busy week. I was just about able to get the last episode ready. And what a turnout that was. I quite enjoyed writing that...
It's an old game, about 1994/5, but I'll see if I can find it and post a link. Graphics are still good, even by today's standards. Here's a...
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Do these images ring a bell? [img] [img] [img] Music is used in communication as well as art, and entertainment. From its written form, it...
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