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    Doesn't Matter Anymore

    this poem is hardcore
    Post by: rastas edible, Apr 14, 2010 in forum: Poetry
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    drifting

    alright kid, that zorba guy is right: gas the rhymes. your passion is there but rhyming is a restriction which is not what poetry is about....
    Post by: rastas edible, Mar 29, 2010 in forum: Poetry
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    I have never seen the creek so high

    "the sun soft and buttery on my belly" what an awesome line...this whole poem is just that, a poem, something that is sadly lacking on a poetry...
    Post by: rastas edible, Nov 7, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    all the women

    all the women had eyes that spilled onto their cheeks and all the women had philosophy by the balls all the women had secrets that melted like...
    Post by: rastas edible, Aug 31, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    where was i

    i'm glad you liked this, vetty...i'm not too sure what it's about, either...but i wrote it drinking beer in a little shithole bar in toronto,...
    Post by: rastas edible, May 2, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    where was i

    pointless garb and saw-toothed fashion she bled silk for days after and fooled them all with a knife she pulled strands from the smog and used...
    Post by: rastas edible, Apr 30, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    flypaper

    thanks everyone on the critique of this one...it's special to me in a way i can't explain...thanks everyone...it's most appreciated
    Post by: rastas edible, Jan 6, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    Lana's babble

    teh horace and bhaskar: thanks for your critique, but more importantly thanks for readin'...all words are welcome... how come you guys don't post...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jan 6, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    Quatrain Quango

    "I couldn't fucking believe it" excellent line.. so raw and owlish...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jan 4, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    Quatrain Quango

    i touched her cheek... the side of her smile... that place where i drove a nail and hung all of my ugly
    Post by: rastas edible, Jan 4, 2009 in forum: Poetry
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    harder and farther

    lies, fabrications and half-truths lined up in front of me like whiskey shots on the bar or even vicious, efficient soldiers gunning...
    Post by: rastas edible, Dec 20, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    then gone

    i tried to write poetry for her eyes, but only drank whisky and doodled the cigarettes i smoked she wasn't impressed i tried to stuff...
    Post by: rastas edible, Dec 20, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Lana's babble

    she said: show me something graceful and fluid nothing in neon or those horrible '80s colours and nothing heavy-metal hard......
    Post by: rastas edible, Dec 20, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    graceful and fluid

    she said: show me something graceful and fluid nothing in neon or those horrible '80s colours and nothing heavy-metal hard... something...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 16, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    flypaper

    we scratch-scratched at the door then held our breath and listened to the night's bass hollow rhythm "let us in," we said, cold and...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 15, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Tatoo

    nice man...the first stanza is pure jazz and symmetry...the last line is a killer finish...good write...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 11, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    all a dream

    "it was a dream, all a dream...i shudder upon waking"...that line was a poem all by itself...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 11, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    heaven

    i like the whole idea of this poem...we see heaven before we are born, not when we die..the first stanza rocks...and rolls from the tongue...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 11, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    ?

    nice...i liked this...the metre is bang on and the voice flows smoothly and easily...heavy topic and a heavier ending...good write
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 11, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    i thought you were on my side

    i thought you were on my side in this fixed game of days my girl for good and worse times spent at least together, or drunk and collapsing or...
    Post by: rastas edible, Jun 10, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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