High Holy Alright thats it you triggered my gag reflex I want to barf all your bullshit back up all over your shirt maybe then you will see itÍs...
Thank you everyone for the feedback, I have been trying to work through a writer's block lately, these poems are actually a couple of months old....
Contemplating Life Through the Milky Way At night here The Milky Way lays out a great ribbon against the deepest blue sky as Ursa Major invites...
Prayer to Isis/Mama Isis mama I'm trying Just give me time I can pick up this ball I know how you must have felt Picking up his pieces Striving...
Thanks for all the feedback everyone, it's nice to know that I really can't please everyone but I can please most people. Mostly though my poetry...
Dirty Girl When I was a little girl I used to get dirty Eat mud pies My mother would scold I would get clean again eventually Just to look...
Water Bearer On down the line I woke up Water bearer showering me Kisses far apart enough to miss the next one Until it gets here Rolling around...
Bukowski, Kerouac, Shakespeare, Neruda, Whitman, and Walker
Drums' Dream drum circles caught, you caught me for my flow I find you inside you my birth begins here this heartbeat my guide into infinity...
Try picking up some writing magazines like Writer's Digest. They usually have ads in the back for poets/writers who would like to be published.
Coming To too much in the world these days all sitting around sucking it up not really knowing what's right or wrong scared, scared shitless at...
This poem is really earthy. I think its really good, just a little editing and it would be phenomenal.
Really good subject, it seems like a real heart piece. Try some different techniques like alliteration, instead of so much rhyming. It will help...
Whew, its been a month or so since I posted here. I got lost in a "relationship" for a bit. Feedback? Resurrected In my mind All these...
Thanks for the feedback everyone, I am glad that you all enjoy what I have written. It takes a lot to even share it here, anonymously, especially...
Every Apple Has a Core Childhood I am a little girl again Eagerly awaiting With chin on table My eyes imploring my mother over Steam rising from...
USED UP I really am getting tired Of this flavor of the week routine I question how much longer I can put my heart up to be Hired out by these men...
Wow, I am somewhat in the same predicament myself, besides trying to read between my own emotional lines, I feel pretty confident that this whole...
Beautiful, this poem makes me shiver and choke up all at the same time.
Couple of new poems about a man I was dating recently. I love being single and dating, the muse is infinite.:H I Tried to Really Swim I...
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