I second... you're way, way ahead of the crowd :)
so lovely... so wholesome... great stuff saff, thx for sharing and keeping the good vibes alive :)
Another wonderful piece from you... I like the way you take the smallest of observations and pull a larger thought from it. For some reason this...
I saw you here in hell’s halls, all blue eyed and platinum fried, seismically stiletto stepping through this white collar zoo, your hips...
This one’s easy… Guided by Voices. Robert Pollard is a genius with about 5000 songs to his name. Hell, they broke up earlier this year and he...
I'm beginning to believe there's something to the loss of car,job, and significant-other during a short span of time. I've read it several times...
This is going to have to be one of my favorites from you…. Liked it quite mucho. I like the edits that Major P did, yet I also like the clearer...
Oh, and on the same note… should we not write about obscure subjects that others might not comprehend? I often use pretty detailed metaphors in...
ah... the great vocabulary and poetry debate! I'm of two minds with this, and basically think it's just different styles of poetry. Stating...
I can feel the frustration here and thought the repetition effective... like telling someone the same thing over and over again, knowing they...
Liked this alot, and being a cat lover, it has a special sentimental type of vibe to it for me... very peaceful poem, and it feels wholesome as...
It was raining the entire 12 hour trip I had yesterday, so I feel ya (memorial day traffic, atlanta, and torrential downpours are not ingredients...
I agree with godhmom, I read and sigh and grin... I love the sentiments you share, and the words you choose resonate with such cool clarity......
-Bee Killer- is simply perfect… I loved it all, the opening is tight and sets a wonderful hook, it opens up in the second stanza and turns loose...
Check out Stereolab, U-Ziq, Red Snapper, Postal Service, Massive Attack, Koop, and Supreme Beings of Leisure... I think they'll fit the bill :)
yay! I've really, really missed your poetry, sylvan!! Reading this was pure heaven... I literally got a smile on my face two miles wide :)...
thanks! I wrote that a few months ago and forgot about it, then found it yesterday and it inspired some guitar, so perhaps we'll actually record...
I basically agree. Sometimes I get a little irked at people saying they're crappy musicians. Writing a simple song that's as catchy as the stuff...
they say it's best to forget it that it only hurts if you let it but some things are oxygen and some things are home, some things are bleeding...
danger’s come back, my word’s upright, I swear… it’s like she held my hand and led the way upstairs, looking over her shoulder with a narrowed...
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