I agree with the others... great job with this one. The only complaint I have is a compliment, and that's the taste of gasoline in my mouth.......
There are some awesome images in here; consistently being pounded out. I enjoyed this very much! The only thing I could suggest is to add a couple...
playfull and haunting imagery you've got here! fantastic flow as well... my favorite part was this... great technique, imagery, and...
You better stabilize. We grow through repetition and gather mundane memories and face Monday mornings constantly. We fill space in a removed...
-tempest- you’ve captured a scene here that at first triggered images of a bjork video (oh so quiet), but your somber tone took over and took me...
great poem; tidy and to all extents... perfect in all respects. thanks for sharing it; I enjoyed muchly :)
in corner booth under orange orb was hot tag from felt sharpie sword. her dyed bandana, blue and black, put insomniacs on their backs cos never...
We met at 9:30 in corner booth under orange orb, leaving hot tag with black felt sharpie sword. she wore a bandana dyed dark blue and black and...
-resignation- I liked the first stanza most here, the last was a little too blunt and either needed to be more elusive or the lashing needed to be...
Awesome last line, which pulled it together for me, and leave a few ways I feel like I can interpret it. Lovely, thanks for sharing more of your...
2nd and 3rd stanzas were my favorite. I liked the way it broke down right there and then (kinda) clarified everything at the end. Nice job you did...
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The last ex liked to leave out crucial information. Such as, I was trying to work things out with her, and she neglected to tell me that she was...
I think it’s relative to the situation. Under the conditions you described, I’d most likely remain friends, unless I was totally infatuated with...
That's no contest for me. Guided by Voices. IMO, they practically invented Indie Rock. To record albums in your basement for almost ten years,...
Some of the guys on Ninja Tune have that same vibe (Kid Koala, Bonobo, Shadow). Other than them, I don't know. He's kinda hard to categorize, as...
-green and black- almost made sense to me... :) I love that feeling when looking into a world that's not like anyone elses, and while nobody's...
Drum and bass is my favorite by far when it comes to electronic music. I've been producing it for around four years now, and recently have started...
Let’s go to the doll house, tonight they’ve got dollar drafts and cute honey’s to deliver shooters in scientific flasks I lay waste to the...
pink carnations incantate radiation drinks rumbling fog waves that inebriate and the time spent here drinking so much beer cold canned...
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