Ex3 is wow. I got really fantastic stuff out of that, it's short but it just strikes a chord.
If I would let myself..this could easily make me cry. That's a compliment. I know this, I've felt this, I feel this and as much as it hurts, there...
[Endless exhalations of toxic mood rings That stretch and drift, Twist and die. Enveloped in a darkness That never delivers; Not even a shadow.]...
Aw thanks for reading and commenting you guys, and I'm sorry I've been absent, I haven't even written anything since this last piece. Life has...
I couldn't agree more! I love the concept and your flow.
Today, I cry too easily, as if my eyes were overripe apricots. So am I, ready to burst at the sound of a word that provokes, or rather...
so swift, your hand stroke brushes off the winter whirl from the hair curl that danced upon the fringe of your buried neck. the heat...
PS the poem isn't bad, but too sing-song rhymey for me, but I just have my own preferences. your ending was kind of eerie, dreaded light made me...
Bird, be nice to groovecookie or if you really want to play an 8 year old internet prodigy, delete those pictures of your ole self in the gallery,...
Maybe I'm just an emotional mess right now, but this almost made me cry. "defunct Houdini" is pure genius! you keep amazing me.
haha that made me laugh out loud.
Are you joking?
You are incredibly talented. I'm in awe! Keep posting! I want this in a book.
[The smoke from the fires collected in the sky as if the city were a lounge filled with haunting jazz and the sweet haze of cigars.] Your opening...
"I'm throwing up blood in regret" good line, visual, brutal. "a Russian with perfect lips pointed towards eternity" haha curious... "she didn't...
You shouldn't apologize...sorry your thread got hijacked.
I think there are valid points from both sides. Not all who give compliments harbor secret agendas and there is a lot of subjectivity involved,...
What's with all these greedy, impatient people posting poetry and expecting comments as if it's their right?? C'mon.. [Everytime I close my eyes...
The second "title unknown" piece was my favorite of the two. I couldn't really connect to the first one. You're using too many generalities, (e.g....
Don't rush it, people will post/reply at their own pace. Right now, I don't have enough time but I will get back later tonight.
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