we kissed under concrete, beside aquamarine set, glass walls enclosing alive beyond, camera capturing ecstatic embrace and evident bond. we...
My opinion on this…. There are definite advantages to having all your stuff within one or two threads that are continuously being updated,...
overall I liked, my favorite lines were but the last line (I need love) doesn't seem to add much... and I think this would be better without...
glad you're back, and with such a wonderfully sensual offering as well! that "we are a mountain" line... what a great image :)
I've been through this. the only thing that worked was absolute no contact. don't respond to anything. change numbers if you have to, take out a...
crescent moon overhead wore pearl halo with intoxicating corporeal compulsion; and if I was draped over you like that, we'd finger-lock bones into...
-playa- was my favorite from your latest, there's a vibe to it I relate to, and the language is perfect. The images stick in the head and evoke...
most impressive! great job at working the vibe with this one... I enjoyed mucho :)
I really liked the first three stanza's, they were strong and well worded; but then it seems to get a little less specific, or you have a specific...
I loved this. I might be interpretting it in my own special way, but it led me down a cool train of thought. Actually, reminds me of one of Bright...
I’m in the Raleigh-Durham-RTP area… most the time. I love having the mountains a few hours one way, and the beach an hour in the other. That and...
Your imagery seems to come from every angle, colliding at last with your desired intention. –Reclaimation- I thought epitomized that. Such...
Footprint the pathway, eco one. Familiarize the measurements, multiply by depth and eulogize the lion leaping over Himalayan tapestries...
it's not in the doldrums, it's only beginning, my man. the technology is moving on and the people trying to at least incorporate the capabilities...
Guided by Voices does it for me... Pollard is simply a genius. I rate him just beneath Lennon on the genius songwriter's level. Too bad they broke...
your grandiflora leaf floret-- organize these and live without reason in hallways driveways sidestreets in alleys in stations in bars in the...
nice one on all levels, sax! great lounge vibe going on there! her voice fits nicely, the band is tops and that sax solo is just right... I always...
you forgot The Cramps.... :)
Pinkerton's where it's at. That album gets better and better with every listen.... the first album's not too bad, but it sounds too processed for...
I used to rewrite classic hits all the time... by accident. For example, I once composed Neil Young's The Needle and the Damage Done for the...
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