I enjoyed -johnny appleseed- thoroughly, I got a sense of chaos about it… of reveling in the larger equilibrium.
Such raw emotion expressing feelings so many can relate to… I’ve definitely been there as well, and had it lead me into sharing with someone I...
Great piece of work! I loved the imagery, it had a tangible nature to it, and combined with an excellent flow, a “spiraling down” feeling was...
I have a pair of those sony headphones, and they’re great… for dj’ing! They’re very bright sounding and don’t have the greatest bass response, and...
I loved this poem... loved the carefree nature it possesses, the beautiful language driving it forward, and the doubt and doomed feeling it ends...
fantastic poem, sylvan! you capture the raw essence and power of the maelstrom in so few words... thx for that :)
that's some excellent work there! I loved pretty much every aspect of this; your technique especially. every stanza begins with a hook and winds...
love the flow you have with this one here... I can see it working quite well as a spoken word piece... and I like the message too, reminds me of...
Great poem! Loved the imagery, so simple and elegant… particularly that stanza that EternalHunter pointed out… enjoyed this one a lot! :)
your work is always enjoyable to take in. I particularly loved the observations in this one... the entire piece felt well rounded. thx for sharing...
this time, distance has damned you. number's disconnected, an operator interruption and the pit is black and bottomless. this pocket's too...
ten thousand embers three stiff crown and cokes and then we sparked flint, the blue propane flame torched a tangled kindling pile and the...
meter your exploration from the pillow on your bed at that dying moonlight moment at the next integral phase at the top of the hour when the alarm...
really enjoyed this one; great job with the flow and breaking up the images, giving them space to breath. I also liked the tone of this, it has a...
enjoyed this alot, sylvan! it seems to depart a little from your usual style.... a little more surreal, almost. I liked how all the images used...
no nocturnal party will take the escalator home we've blown the grid.... yes we did so let's explore the backrooms for the unknown because...
awesome work, here! love the surreal nature, the twisted word-play, the flow and the vibe you got going here.... thx mucho for this! what a...
i enjoyed this mucho! great form and yeah, the rhythm is smooth and an afterthought to what's being said. I especially liked the last two...
excellent execution here! the imagery is top notch, the flow is just right... really, this was a perfect read... kudos!
your scrapbook was amazing.... passionate and so very real on many levels. I love how it's detailed at moments and reflective at others. -home-...
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