"my home is in my head"...one of my bob marley t-shirts says this...& its definitely lyrics from a Jackie Lomax song but i like your flow and...
Recluse i'm a clock tower captive chasing the second hand in circles, a chicken with no head chasing Death around the barnyard, a dog that...
lmao that is funny...i laughed out loud
Falling Apart i've dabbled in falling apart, refined it to quite an art: i'm a clay sculpture crumbling ear-nose-finger plink and fling like...
i like the first and thrid stanzas, i dont feel that the second stanza does anything for your poem, it could be cut out and the poem would be...
"revealed" is an awesome poem, some really powerful raw emotion...
i really like your poetry here...the first one is my favorite, but the second rocks too, especially the images in the first part of it...in the...
these are definitely my favorite lines...i like the disjointed-ness of this piece, it carries your message well...i was distracted, however, by...
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lol i think this poll is funny! hmmm...i go to sleep, he showers and goes back home to his gf...she must not be doing it for him...
^ i liked the last two stanzas the best...they're the strongest...i would like to see what you could build on those images... can i make one...
^ yah cuz that's helpful... i want to know what this looks like...describe for me how things look...i want some concrete details so i can know...
wow very powerful poem...i especially ejoyed the second stanza (the last four lines are awesome), also, "the darkness will lose its glory" is a...
i have never encountered a poem with so many blahblah's...so congrats, you were a first for me... i suggest moving to eastern Canada...last time i...
this song made me smile...i liked it! the first three stanzas were my favorite, good images
i like this poem, and i'm not usually a rhyming fan..."the sun just fell down," and "a presence like thunder" are great lines...anyway...can i...
*a big thanks to sylvanlightning for correcting my picture problems!*
[img] [img] Sierra Leone What does a small-town, USA girl do with National Geographic snapshots of Sierra Leone citizens? There is no...
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