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  1. skyfire
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    Curtains of Existence

    these were my favorite parts...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 27, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    fetters

    i like this part...very easy to visualize
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 27, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    Waiting For You the phone doesnt ring. the candle's wax drowns its own wick. in their vase flowers undress tired of holding their petals....
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 24, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    Chicago's Baby Girl (for Niecey...)* she took the pills to find the music in her ears walked to the edge of the world and stepped off a falling...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    thanks sylvan...what a nice comment! happy new year 2 u 2 btw... hawkins...thanks for taking the time to read through my stuff...i always enjoy...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A heart shaped perfume bottle,

    welcome to the forums! i like the first stanza the best in this poem...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    euthanation

    i kinda liked this...some parts were a bit cliche, but your disgust is very clear...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Curtains of Existence

    i feel like this a lot...a lot of my darker stuff i keep to myself...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Major P's Poems

    its a bit hard to believe that you were only rated four stars...i really enjoyed all of these poems...you really use imagery and your powers of...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    The air is cut with cyanide

    For the most part i like your poems...you have great potential...i see some really promising stuff here. sometimes it is, however, hidden amongst...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    My first poetry post! "An idealist to the world"

    welcome to the poetry forum...keep writing!
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 23, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    Pieces of Me

    i like your voice and whimsical tone, it pulls your reader in well...i prefer the second of your poems, i like the concept and you have some good...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 7, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    The Little Red Book

    i was going back through your thread and i really enjoyed watching "the test" develop...i do that a lot, leave a poem be for a while then go back...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 7, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    Red...thanks for coming back again, your comments are always appreciated. i'm glad you liked "falling apart," it was the most personal, and the...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 7, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    The Knowledgeable Tide

    I like this...you pulled off a very nostalgic feel, like the tide...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 2, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    creative improv writing

    the edited version has a more powerful impact...good job on starting to tighten and focus...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 2, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    thanks appleseed...i'm glad you liked it, i wrote it after a conversation i had with my mom, she has a hard time grasping the concept of the...
    Post by: skyfire, Jan 2, 2008 in forum: Poetry
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    A few recent pieces

    thanks guys, i apreciate your comments... sylvan...i stole your word and made it my title...i decided it fit (thank you)...glad you liked......
    Post by: skyfire, Dec 19, 2007 in forum: Poetry
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    of peace and (wo)man kind..

    this piece is powerful...very evocative...keep doing whatever u did here, it works for u
    Post by: skyfire, Dec 19, 2007 in forum: Poetry
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    creative improv writing

    the first stanza is the strongest it could be a poem on its own...
    Post by: skyfire, Dec 19, 2007 in forum: Poetry
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