'Cemetery Stroll' was more a loose collection of thoughts, than a story. In 'Working Girl' I knew that first person narrative wouldn't work, since...
The story is a farce, but has dark elements to create dramatic tension, which is something many readers like. See my entry 5 above, "notes on the...
I apologize for not adding a lot to the conversation. Now tell me about your contributions here. The Thorazine Dreams piece (the only one by you...
Hunter Thompson liked psychedelics. Norman Mailer liked booze. Edgar Poe was apparently a boozer but not a doper. Richard Brautigan was an...
If the first sentence 'just ran on', it did so for a total length of 1 1/2 lines. It tells the reader that the main character is female, lives in...
Wars will cease when men refuse to fight.
Why should the Yanks invade us? To take over what they already own?
You could try for a nice alcohol/pentobarbital hit. It might make for a VERY short story. Pentobarbital (nembutal) is what vets use to euthanize...
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Taken together, these pieces might make a good short story for children. Children, of course, need lots of illustrations, so putting them in...
I get the error, "/tmp/Charlie Horses.txt could not be opened, because the associated helper application does not exist. Change the association in...
Not a problem. In fact, I'm in favor of hard drugs. If it weren't for hard drugs, all of these airheads would live to adulthood.
I refer you to Guideline number 4, with regard to flaming/trolling/stalking. Personal attacks are not allowed here. If this guideline is no...
This type of personal attack is unacceptable and I have asked site management to bar you from Hip Forums.
Barbiturates plus alcohol? Like I said earlier, this could be the hit that ends the ball game. Or maybe that's what you're trying for.
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