*bravo bravo* This was the best piece I've read in a long time. Tender, human, real. "Where is my glow?"...ain't that the truth!! Fantastic write.
Ted Hughes - Crow - From the Life & Songs of the Crow
this is a perfect moment. a wonderfully framed past and present. Sentimental fool, I am, to be touched so....
damn I loved so many moments in there. It was funny, true and often brutal. bang Lei-gong's seismic threat short circuits white hot corposant,...
This was intriguing, but I'm a little baffled by it. I enjoyed it, but can't say I understood it!
lol this was quirky and fun. it was a comic strip.
tantalisingly short...hoped for more...this was a pleasant observation. Optimistic too - we're not out of winter yet. Hopeful indeed.
this was tranquil, still. very evocative. thanks for posting. tasty.
*smiles* Not mindblowing, but a pleasant relief from the drivel that is today. scool.
hmm like the idea a lot....not so sure about the rendering, but interesting nonetheless
Ok, maybe this would help if we looked a different art form. If somebody asked you to come listen to them play at a saxophone recital, and they...
wow Saff that was incredible!!
not sure what i just walked in on. Your poem lacks cohesion....I have no idea what you're trying to tell me.
somethingwitty I'd say keep persevering. As everyone has said above there's a diverse array of experience on this forum, as well as a whole wealth...
don't understand everyone's comments.... I enjoyed the first part very very much. Quite haunting. You lost me in the second half though!
Kidder - I like this poem a lot, esp the erotic ending!
Thanks Saff, the Prof, gdhmomchild, ripple and anyone else I've missed off - I appreciate your kind words, and so pleased you can relate to...
hear hear
lol...and why the change of heart!!?
A pocket full of pins bent double like old men is a good way to stop the everyday jinxes of untold numbers of witches with nothing better to do...
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