Still birth mother
Scripts reek the despration
of her mournful frame
proud with waste
Chin raging against the gentle breeze.
this was rather beautiful... thanks for sharing
Spokesperson for the hoi polloi
Fat and fusty by normality
Suckling her comfortable tit with tractable lips
Seeing icons of freedom...
Thank you for your comments, glad you liked it.
Incongruous hands that draw
Judgments all numbered
Shadow and color
The eyes touch them...
My interpretation of this is acceptance and forgiveness. (I rarely interpret poems as the writers intended.) But I liked the way it flowed while...
hah... By razor face. A sure giveaway is the petered out last stanza. But glad you were confused.
Shall I compare thee to a blackened brick? Lol... this was fun. :) :cracks up: Got better the second time.
Thank you! Yeah, there's a great deal of poetry I haven't read. I've already found some lines I won't forget and have still only read three or...
From thick greens of vibrant weeds
And fresh joys shared while unaware
Young dreamers stand to diverge from land
odd... reads like it would be a tongue twister.. but the L's make the words fall into each other.. cool
I'll be checking out By W.H. Auden, thanks for posting.
With all love rejected,
Detached from movement,
Resistance by the trembling,
Is measured and used.
And as the gentle...
lol... pshaw... silly mad bombers...
Too true. :)
fascist tests are boring
Yeah, less tv is good. Network tv is evil. The best rpg's.... are art.
Yeah... Kerry's a real war monger... :cough:
ouch.....felt that one.
Was expecting a rant on bad writing and instead got a very honest, personal, direct expression of bitterness. A very good...
The campaign to smear Kerry’s service to obscure the fact that Bush dodged the war is typical of the way republicans operate. The whole debate...
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