ur a dick - Hip Forums
Hip Forums Click to Upgrade Your HipForums Account   Click to Chat
Hip Forums Home Register Forum Options Mark Forums Read Social Groups Hip Universe Hip Radio Chat Room

Thread Title Search    
User's Login
User Name
Password
Remember Me?
Click to see Sexy Dolls
Hip Shops
Latest Videos
Active Journals
Forum Description: Poets, share your poetry here!
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 01-27-2005, 09:57 PM   #1
AnnieChere
Member
 
AnnieChere's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: US
Posts: 22
AnnieChere is on a distinguished road
ur a dick
Like this post? Yes | No    

this is to mi dad



shut up u dickhed
wen will u lern to respect me
im just a little kid like u
so stop thinkig ur abov me

i can fly too
u go fly upstate to ur woman
i fly in my mind higher then u can evr hope too go
so get in ur car and fly
ill be waiting in teh sky

wen i come downstares i see
the food prosesser on teh counter
how many carots have died
so u can eat sallad

i am a carot to u know
but im peoplecolored insted of orenge
stuf me in ur food prosesser
chew me up
ill be ded by thirten
u dickhed
__________________
yeah!
AnnieChere is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:24 PM   #2
Carlfloydfan
Travel lover
 
Carlfloydfan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: EARTH
Age: 29
Posts: 7,086
Carlfloydfan has a spectacular aura aboutCarlfloydfan has a spectacular aura aboutCarlfloydfan has a spectacular aura about
Like this post? Yes | No    

This is to my Dad



Shut up you dickhead
When will you learn to respect me?
I'm just a little kid, like you
So stop thinking you're above me

I can fly too
You go fly upstate to your woman
I fly in my mind higher then you can ever hope too go
So get in your car and fly
I'll be waiting in the sky

When I come downstares I see
The food prosesser on the counter
How many carots have died
so you can eat salad

I am a carot too you know?
But I'm people colored instead of orange
Stuff me in your food prosesser
Chew me up
I'll be dead by thirteen
You dickhead


....Now it's a little easier to read....
Carlfloydfan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:26 PM   #3
Jack_Straw2208
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: America
Posts: 1,890
Jack_Straw2208 is on a distinguished road
Like this post? Yes | No    

it certainly does sound like the poetry of an angst filled 11 or 12 year old girl...

go listen to some 'taking back sunday' or something, you dad hating, mashed potato eating emoxcore (with the silent x) little kid.



your poem is t3h suck.
so is your grammar.
__________________
Jack_Straw2208 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:26 PM   #4
NaykidApe
Bomb the Ban
 
NaykidApe's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 8,418
NaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura about
I liked it better the first way. And I liked it alot.
__________________
whining does you no good, It amuses your enemies and annoys your friends.
---Burma Shave
NaykidApe is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:28 PM   #5
NaykidApe
Bomb the Ban
 
NaykidApe's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 8,418
NaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura about
Like this post? Yes | No    

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jack_Straw2208
you say you're 22, but you'll "be ded by thirten" [sic]? wha?

it certainly does sound like the poetry of an angst filled 11 or 12 year old girl...

go listen to some taking back sunday or something, you dad hating, mashed potato eating emoxcore (with the silent x) little kid.



your poem is t3h suck.
Um... I don't see an age statement anywhere. She's got 22 posts, that's the only number I see.
__________________
whining does you no good, It amuses your enemies and annoys your friends.
---Burma Shave
NaykidApe is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:29 PM   #6
Jack_Straw2208
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: America
Posts: 1,890
Jack_Straw2208 is on a distinguished road
Like this post? Yes | No    

gasp, the tables have turned.


alas, now i am t3h suck.
__________________
Jack_Straw2208 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:30 PM   #7
Jack_Straw2208
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: America
Posts: 1,890
Jack_Straw2208 is on a distinguished road
Like this post? Yes | No    

i changed my post... but still, let it be know that i am t3h suck.
__________________
Jack_Straw2208 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:33 PM   #8
NaykidApe
Bomb the Ban
 
NaykidApe's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 8,418
NaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura aboutNaykidApe has a spectacular aura about
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jack_Straw2208
i changed my post... but still, let it be know that i am t3h suck.
It takes a big man to admit they're t3h, whatever that means.
__________________
whining does you no good, It amuses your enemies and annoys your friends.
---Burma Shave
NaykidApe is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:42 PM   #9
Jack_Straw2208
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: America
Posts: 1,890
Jack_Straw2208 is on a distinguished road
Like this post? Yes | No    

3ng|15h (not quite 1337, not quite english..).. t3h=teh=the
__________________
Jack_Straw2208 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-27-2005, 10:50 PM   #10
Jack_Straw2208
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: America
Posts: 1,890
Jack_Straw2208 is on a distinguished road
Like this post? Yes | No    

man, i totally just made that up.. im fuckin smoooooth..
__________________
Jack_Straw2208 is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 04:09 PM.

The Hip Forums are intended for mature audiences for entertainment and educational purposes only. Hip Inc. doesn't encourage anyone to break laws, so know the law where you live. You are solely responsible for your actions on this site and illegal activities will be not be tolerated here.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright Hip Inc. 1996-Forever!