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Old 05-09-2004, 07:35 AM   #1
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Default 2 min free write

one of my teachers used to have the class do 2 minute timed free writes. some interesting things came up in mine. they kinda made me wonder if i was schitzophrenic, because it was like i was asking myself questions, but also answering them. my teacher was amazed that i could come up with this stuff in such a short amount of time. well here goes...



in the distance, someone screaming
angels singing sounds of healing
bells chime
who do we know
when there's nothing left, and nowhere to go?
sound of rain, every where but here
sun can destroy our rivers so dear
how do we know what is to come
when our hearts are empty
and our dreaming is done?
time is nothing compared to wating
time is nothing but what we are wasting
no one knows better, but they think they do
what happens when friends aren't what we knew?
when our lives change, do we notice?
do we care?
how do we know what is to be fare
do not blame time, it is innocent
blame yourselves, the insignificant

revealing my thoughts, i have nothing better to do
i have nothing left to live for, i no longer have you
we didn't need words, our actions were too good for that
i thought i had you, but where were you at?
I remember, regretfully, the way i felt
you were the only one that could make me melt
we didn't last long, you knew we wouldnt
but i was fooled, and i never understood it

nothing is everything i feel
lost without you, i've never felt so real
pain like this never ends
i knew that when it all began
but still, i believed in your words.
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Old 05-09-2004, 07:39 AM   #2
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never believe in words, for they are merely representations. gotta find what's beneath, and flow with it. but i like these words, they speak of a process, a path through which spirit flows, the residue of calamity- evolution.


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Old 05-10-2004, 05:49 PM   #3
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well believe in yourself
believe in your words
act upon your words and move forward

true words only represent the self from within
what we have experienced lost or gained or have seen
in life and all feelings and thoughts

sometimes free time to write can be a great thing to
allow areselves time to respond to ourselves and others

lovely worded piece here
let your words flow always

and most of all write from truth from you......

love npeace from saff
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Old 05-10-2004, 06:37 PM   #4
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I 2 mins is nothing near enough. That isn't even warm up time for me, I normally do at least 30mins.
You are right though. The stuff you come out with is wierd. When I do it, I always write as if no-one will read it. It is a good way of confronting the subconscious.

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