sweet wonder

sweet wonder in control everlasting, behold

contempt shall brew and anger rule

hate seeking vengeance beneath the placid blue

pale skin peach hair fingers long with tempting flare

unearth a beauty in disguise

eaten from the outside retching to subside

white lace gown, this ironic patience in a frown

crown of light, a simple fight.

hollowed trees compose songs of the past

archaic frequency whistling hard and fast

agonizing sorrows groan deep inside

echoing the lost and forced to abide.

closed eyes the wrath unfolds tear drops forming behold

a lost soul withering on the grass

despondent blue emit an iridescent flash

guidance an earthly one unity yet become

wrapped warm and deep in delicate leaves

young branches lift her gently to her knees

petals swarm and innocently find her ear

and together they whisper, “i am here”

deliciously existential.


much love

Originally Posted by osiris

deliciously existential.

hehe... excellent response friend.

with love,
kayatree

i hope with this new forum comes more from you.

cheers, mate... hope yer keepin' cool, aye.

beautious! i always read your poetry at least twice when i come across it.

exquisite!!

Originally Posted by VanAstral

i hope with this new forum comes more from you.

cheers, mate... hope yer keepin' cool, aye.

Hey sweetness! Good to see ya around...

luvin' u,
kayatree

Wow, this is very beautifully written. Unfortunately, it seems like the author is no longer active but that does nothing to take away from the beauty of this piece. I especially like the rhyme, it's not very strict and still allows the poem to flow.

Thamks Samhain for digging this up and putting it in the spotlight. I wonder how many more gems there are hidden in the histories of Hipfoums. If I ever have the time I might have to do a spot of browsing.

Peace,
A.

I even read it twice. it seems very interesting

Excellent ~~*