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Old 05-08-2004, 11:07 PM   #1
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i wrote this when i was eight and it makes me feel happy:

beetles beetles hard and black
beetles legs go clickety clack
beetles with shells on their back
beetle please dont go on the train track


ive just been looking through my old school books you see
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Old 05-09-2004, 07:21 AM   #2
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Old 05-09-2004, 03:11 PM   #3
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