burst of light........

to all ...

ive followed the path , in a swollen
stream.
temptation, the taste burned deep
rolling tears, all did blind.
rotten thoughts , an open mind
ive gone beneath a sheltered
wound.
covered it licked it and spooned,
none did heal..
ive flown with a burst of light
many a human i know would.
to melt the rays ,widen the
way.
the rapid waters ,oh carried
me onward.
banish the callous memories
now
ive fallen again ,wings stretched
eye so free....
can this feeling ,detach even isolate
that inner soul inner ME
ive given all ,what more do i have
begin to wonder I begin to wonder..........
now this second ,i will land

thank you love n peace from saff

Love it!!

i like it alot sounds like some of the stuff i've written some time ago

what brilliantly abstract imagery you have in this piece! makes for a very interesting read, like painting a picture and watching it form... well done!