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Old 05-12-2004, 04:52 PM   #1
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Talking Tomorrow's Journey

All my follies are what i amount
Each days work and play is never enough
Watching myself fall into what all humanity does.
Facing it, without regret, makes the youth so tough
Building a wall to watch it fall for reasons just because.
Forget everything; its importance nonexsisting.
Lose it all in a journey beyond
Finding eternal bliss more vexing than thought.
The light thats lit the way; our bond
Its the time I find what things i sought.
Love in its most divine, intangible form
Feeling, but unable to grasp and hold.
Still i walk, or crawl, through reality
So far, im here; so weak, im bold
Today? Tomorrow? Let sorrow be
Tears for joy and tears for pain
waiting, waiting; living without you
Hoping its true that love will find a way.
Knowing it will come, the day it will be just us two.
Tomorrow they say, not today.
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Old 05-13-2004, 12:05 AM   #2
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just felt i had to say

this made me tingle
very lovely to read
very raw also what you have to say on how you feel.....

love n peace from saff
keep writing
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Old 05-27-2006, 05:31 AM   #3
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Love that! That's my Journey for the summer put into words perfectly!
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Old 05-27-2006, 01:39 PM   #4
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This is like a hot knife stabbing into my buttery soul, going deep and melting all around it. I loved it.
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