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Old 05-12-2004, 02:06 AM   #1
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Default My gift to my mom on mothers day poem.

My mother deserves more than I can give,
Every cent I earn for as long as I live,
Would never repay;
her gift of my birthday,
Raising me to love,
there is so much more I could say,
Deserving;
20 years of youth that I've taken from you,
A mountain of emotions that I put you through,
Ten thousand gallons of tears that you shed for me,
A new pair of eyes because you helped me to see...
the right kind of man that I should be,
All the things that you deserve I cannot give,
The best I can do is choose the RIGHT path to live.

Love,
Kyle
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Old 05-12-2004, 02:40 AM   #2
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Cool

that's absolutely lovely.
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Old 05-12-2004, 02:43 AM   #3
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Hey thank you very much, my mom cried when she read it. I feel proud to be her son so i want her to know i appreciate her.
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