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Old 06-28-2004, 04:51 PM   #1
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color my wings
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light a candle for me, if you want to
for i have slipped away from you
a butterfly
tinselly
yet beautiful
cannot live
when it's caged
you prefered to lock what's inside of me
'cause you never wanted to know
who i am
now you can sing an elegy for me, if you want to
for my shattered self
fallen from sanity
fragile
yet alive
i am
and i had to pull myself out of all that alone
'cause all you did was laughing it off
who i am
because if you would just look out
you'd realize what life's actually about
we all are
tinselly
yet beautiful
butterflies
caged to freedom
colorless individuals
left to fall
so color my wings
color these rainbows
in other shades
of grey
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note: english is not my mother tongue, so there might be mistakes :&
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Old 06-28-2004, 11:45 PM   #2
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O_o I really like it!
Totally groovy!
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