She Came

[Nathan11]

She came from afar
To see his beautiful face
They are now over par


I had to write this for my english class, I like it, I left it open ended so it can mean to you, what you want it to mean.

[Bro_Rific]

Are they golfing? WTF

[Moonjava]

Are they golfing? WTFLOL, I didn't quite understand the ending either, but it has potential. You should work on it some more, turn it into a masterpiece!! (Not that it isn't one already........) Peace.